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About Me Member Hack ScarredLittleGirl20/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 4 Years
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Novel update.

Sun Feb 17, 2008, 9:44 PM
I've re-edited the first chapter, rewritten and rougly edited the second, and I'm in the process of writing the third.

I've uploaded the first and second chapters (the second is in a two part format, due to the file being too large to upload as one) and I would greatly appreciate feedback. I'm worried that the second chapter isn't as great as the original...and I'm really afraid that I half assed it. So, if anyone would take the time to read it, I'd be eternally greatful.

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  • Current Residence: Plainview, TX
  • Interests: Art, people, music, philosophy, horror
  • Favourite movie: The Hours, Trainspotting
  • Favourite genre of music: a lot of genres of rock
  • Favourite poet or writer: Anne Sexton, Oscar Wilde, Charles Dickens

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:iconadiiacovo:
Finally you add me!!!!!
:iconexspiro:
very nice prose. i have this new collaborative writing site going up i think you might be interested.

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:icon1sweetpsycho:
wow. your poems are great! i really love how much emotion you put into them, i wish i had that... just keep the good ones coming!! luv always, steph
:iconlamantedivita:
Welcome to DA, you've got some good stuff on here. keep up the good work!
:iconscarredlittlegirl:
I just submitted quite a bit of writing, some old--some new. Some seems rather childish now, but I'm posting it because I remember how I felt reading it for the first time. I'll leave you with this:

“I wanted to write about it all. Everything that happens in a moment. The way the flowers looked when you carried them in your arms. This towel, how it…smells, how it feels. This thread. All our feelings, yours and mine. The history of it, who we once were. Everything in the world. Everything all mixed up…like it’s all mixed up now. And I failed. I failed. No matter what you start with it ends up being so much less. Sheer fucking pride…and stupidity. “
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